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Offline ·WídgêT·

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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #555 on: January 30, 2010, 08:25:04 PM »
Well there Mr. T
You got the syllables right
But the wrong order

It's supposed to be
5-7-5 but you did
6-4, not 5-5

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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #556 on: January 31, 2010, 02:12:27 AM »
Are you mocking my
Poor English grammer
Skills? *snif snif snif snif*

Ran outa things to say
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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #557 on: January 31, 2010, 05:46:22 AM »
No, not at all T,
Though your spelling may need work -
"grammar" has two a's.
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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #558 on: January 31, 2010, 08:11:02 AM »
speed distance time squared
but math cannot calculate
the blood element
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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #559 on: January 31, 2010, 09:14:19 AM »
I'm sorry, Akuma?
That seemed rather off-topic -
Don't forget to link!!
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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #560 on: January 31, 2010, 09:22:07 AM »
We had to link these?
Wow i was just posting stuff
That had nothing same.
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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #561 on: January 31, 2010, 09:32:22 AM »
It says in the rules
Yours has to be connected
To the last haiku

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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #562 on: January 31, 2010, 09:44:10 AM »
well i didn't read
i just typed out what i felt
it seemed like a good one
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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #563 on: January 31, 2010, 04:51:35 PM »
We all make mistakes.
No one is perfect, buddy.
So let's keep going!
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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #564 on: January 31, 2010, 04:53:08 PM »
Nice touch there, Goalie
Never knew haikus could be
Inspirational

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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #565 on: January 31, 2010, 05:11:41 PM »
Confucius he say
"Forget injuries, never
forget kindnesses."

The cool thing of that
is that that is word-for-word
what the quote source said.
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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #566 on: May 11, 2010, 08:20:43 PM »
I choose to reply to,
the first quote that you have made,
I would like to say

A philosophy,
Actions speak louder than words,
show that you really care.
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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #567 on: May 12, 2010, 12:33:31 PM »


Uh-Oh! >tsk< >tsk< >tsk< !
'Got to watch your meter there!
Count: 5-7-5!



I choose to re-ply to,    6
the first quote that you have made,    7
I would like to say     5

A philosophy,    5
Actions speak louder than words,    7
show that you real-ly care.    6



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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #568 on: May 12, 2010, 01:42:25 PM »
ooh my bad i will,
work on counting my meter,
more accurately
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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #569 on: May 12, 2010, 01:53:53 PM »
Toot, I'm back on this
Wonderful topic, full of
Inteligent peeps
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