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General Category => General Board => Homework Haven => Topic started by: conrad96 on October 10, 2009, 12:01:02 PM
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i'm writing an essay for language arts the topic is WHEN IS THE RIGHT TIME TO HONOR OUR NATIONS MILITARY HEROS? any ideas?(it has to be 250-340 words) i could only think of all the time. but i don't think that will last me 300 words. :eyebrow:
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The best way to stretch out an idea is to add support, why you believe your answer is correct.
Other than that, you could give reasons why other answers may not be as correct.
Relate the subject to something in your life or in current events.
Just make sure that whatever you add is tied into the main idea of your paper.
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I can't comeup with anything more than one sentence.
"Is there ever a wrong time to honour our military heroes?"
~Fraggle
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I think it's pretty clear that the answer most people like best is "all the time". YOu might want to explain this by mentioning that most of the news headlines about military stuff focus on the one or two moments when something goes wrong, and that being a soldier is a 24/7 job while in combat. So because they never stop fighting why should we stop thinking about them?
Or something like that.
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thanks ppl ive got better ideas now that ive thought all of your advice through.
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just wanted to give u guys the update. ive broken my essay into three parts sacrifice, bravery, and patriotism. im going to adress theese things as to say this is why we shouldnt stop honoring them.
once again thank you all.