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Offline BambiIare

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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #540 on: July 16, 2009, 05:22:14 AM »
staples hurt a lot
I had one in my hand once
it was not very nice
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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #541 on: July 19, 2009, 07:01:30 PM »


NOTE: Water, Water

Everywhere... on OUR planet.

...The staple of life!?!

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Offline Tåndêm

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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #542 on: September 17, 2009, 07:58:09 PM »
Once upon a time
I attacked a stapler
Very bad idea
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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #543 on: September 17, 2009, 08:22:55 PM »
Quote from: Tåndêm on September 17, 2009, 07:58:09 PM
Once upon a time
I attacked a stapler
Very bad idea

Uh-Oh! >tsk< >tsk< >tsk< !
a syllable from line two
got into line three!

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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #544 on: September 17, 2009, 09:58:38 PM »
It's really easy
to mess up a Haiku, man.
Shall we try again?

(okay, that didn't
make any sense to me.  So
do I try again?)
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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #545 on: September 18, 2009, 06:35:49 AM »
(This isn't in haiku form just letting you know)

I'm planning on writing one of my college essays in a series of haikus, if it's really good I'll post it here :winkgrin:
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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #546 on: September 18, 2009, 11:23:14 AM »
Quote from: ·WídgêT· on September 18, 2009, 06:35:49 AM
(This isn't in haiku form just letting you know)

I'm planning on writing one of my college essays in a series of haikus, if it's really good I'll post it here :winkgrin:

Permission granted to allow one and only one post by Wid-Get that does NOT follow the "something to do with the previous haiku" rule.


(And if someone turned in a haiku-style essay to me that didn't meet the same content standard - or better, in fact - I'd dock 'em a grade....  ::) So don't skimp, Wid-Get!)
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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #547 on: January 19, 2010, 12:56:31 PM »
It has been so long
so i thought I would post one
think i will do two

Just letting you know
Haiku's may cause brain cramping
ouch it kind of hurts!

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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #548 on: January 19, 2010, 01:11:43 PM »
Man, who could have known
That Haikus caused brain cramping
I feel bad for you

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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #549 on: January 19, 2010, 01:41:27 PM »
Well, I don't know Floyd.
I find Haikus easy to
write - or do I rea- ?

Okay, that was bad.
Ending with a half-formed word
Kind of looks silly.
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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #550 on: January 19, 2010, 01:44:19 PM »
You're right it does, man
Especially coming from you
What is wrong with you?

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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #551 on: January 19, 2010, 01:56:36 PM »
Technically, Widge,
I did it deliberately.
For "comic" effect.

Also, so's you know,
"Deliberately" is said thus:
"Del-lib-brut-lee" - four!!

What I mean to say,
is that my first haiku had
the correct pattern.
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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #552 on: January 21, 2010, 01:11:29 PM »


Now, now, 360
The preferred form is more like
de⋅lib⋅er⋅ate⋅ly....

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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #553 on: January 30, 2010, 04:48:43 PM »
Mxy, as you know,
English is quite flexible,
syllables are too!

For example, I
say "lie-bree" but in the States,
it is "lie-brair-ee".

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Re: Post your ORIGINAL Haiku's here!
« Reply #554 on: January 30, 2010, 06:10:47 PM »
Never done a Haiku,
I Dont know if this is right
Cheese cats eat cheese

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